Praxis Writing Practice Test (Improving Sentences) 3

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Jewelry is an accessory used by members of all classes including watches, necklaces and earrings.

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There are many reasons to see I Heart Huckabees, Jason Schwartzman’s performance being one reason.

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Fraternities are a great way to make friends and learn important lessons of loyalty and compassion.

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Lindsey knows that the reason people dislike her is because of her being a Philadelphia Phillies fan.

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Sports commentators often provide informative and witty insight during games that enhance the sports-watching experience.

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A shockingly indelible moment, I remember exactly where I was and what I was doing when I found out that Kurt Cobain had died.

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Since the work force is becoming increasingly competitive in light of technological advances and outsourcing, therefore, it is even more basic for students to complete high school and attain at least a bachelor’s degree.

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Study the ancient fighting art of Hapkido and you will learn to avoid directly matching your strength against your opponent’s.

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Plenty of high school students spend their time involved in the community by working with peers, young children and also helping senior citizens.

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McCarthyism was an ideology and an applied pursuit that arose in the middle of the twentieth century and targeted communists in the United States state department.